My writing is a beautiful, gleaming bubble that is blown into the air. My writing starts with a good introduction. Just like a bubble being blown into the air makes a grand entrance. It floats along for a while with decent body paragraphs, a not so strong conclusion until it finally pops and disappears into oblivion. My writing is like a bubble because it starts out strong and becomes weaker as it goes along. This happens because I have many thoughts about what to write, but when it needs more length than I have ideas for, I run out of steam and it crumbles. Writing has structure. It has sentence structure and grammar.
The details that go into writing to create a good piece, has to have structure and plot first. The structure of a bubble is a soap film that combines with water and air. There are soap molecules that are all over the inside and outside surfaces. The layer of water is between the two layers of soap molecules. The layers work together to hold the air inside so that it can float, rising into the air. My writing has structure like a bubble. The structure is very thin, so, it can be destroyed easily and turn into a mess. You can compare the soap film layer of the bubble to an introductory paragraph in an essay. The water in the middle is like the body paragraphs. The last soap film layer is the concluding paragraph. The first and last layers, (the introduction and conclusion) are similar because the introduction starts with a hook.
The conclusion paragraph turns the attention back to the hook. A bubble would not form without its middle layer and neither would an essay be formed without its middle paragraphs. My writing has all of these layers, but they can be kind of flimsy. It does not have enough depth. There is plenty of detail, but the points don’t often come across as strong ones. Bubbles can reflect some very colorful light waves. Writing can also be colorful. Especially when you know how to add texture to your writing, or when you have a good story to tell. Colors change in bubbles and in writing. Colors change in a bubble when the layers get smaller and the water evaporates. Colors change in writing when there are different uses of analogies, metaphors, connotations, etc.
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The color changes in my writing because I try my best to create a good understanding of my topic. Writing can be many things. However, I like to use the metaphor that mine is a bubble. It’s a bubble because it starts out grand and beautiful and fun. Then it starts to evaporate until it pops. Just like my writing. It can get uninteresting after it pops. The popping of my writing doesn’t have to be a bad thing. It could also mean that when I wrap everything up, it goes out with a bang.
